With the harmony of his whispers and her heart beats,
they composed a symphony
Combine the sun and the moon, add the twinkling stars
and let them swim in that explosion.
It is her beauty that forced music into the deaf’s ears,
and sun light into the blinded.
Her eyes have released his sealed lips,
and unlocked the tomb of his frail dreams.
She could hear the screams behind the silence of her charming monster.
She was his excess adrenaline rushing through his veins.
He walked so gracefully as his feet fractured the ground.
He was a cyclone and she was a spring breeze.
She was astonished by her unidentified charming monster,
as he was mesmerized by her velvet touch.
As beautiful as that endless dialogue about the contrast of black and white, they were.
© 2011 Alia Sultan
asultan1.wordpress.com 
Truly beautiful..you are soo talented!
I love abstract thoughts! This was very pleasant to read, thank you for sharing.
Lovely work.
This is a nice piece, I’ve always been fascinated by the imagery of a lover as a monster, “charming monster” has a particular effectiveness, very well done.
Thank you =) !
How delicate… Sounds like music, softly whispered on ethereal air scented with fresh roses…
What a beautiful feedback ! Thank u =)
I love the last sentence. It just tied everything up together, I always think of poetry as deep and love it so much. Your work is phenomenal.
Your comments are very encouraging, I’d love to read more of them. Thank you ! =D
Beyond beautiful. The vividness is breath taking! One of my favorites!
Honestly lovely.
Thank u Lora ! =)
And you were the perfect frame for that contrast. As what a picture without a frame? =) xXx
Thank u Haifa I love u !!
Simply beautiful yet striking, with wonderful allegory. It warms so much.
I’m pleased to know you enjoyed it, thank u ! =D
I love the image I get when I read, “velvet touch.” Lovely wording.
Thank you Thomas ! =)
Thank u all for ur kind words.
I really enjoyed reading your piece. Your writing expressions are very creative and detailed. I noticed that the background graphic, at your webpage appears too dark and difficult for my eyes to see, and the test is small. You do not have to change anything for me, but i have to strain my eyes to read your work. I see that you speak an Arabic dialect? Being bilingual is a great advantage in a global world. Unfortunately, being American,we are lazy with learning other languages and becoming fluent. Anyway, from what I can see, your poetry writing is very creative and impressive. Yet, I consider the best writings to be short, simple and brief, such as economy of words. May God always protect you and bless you, where you go.
Thank u so much for ur kind words. Yes, Arabic is my native language. I did not notice the effect of the background colors on the text, so I enlarged the text to make it easier for readers to read, I hope that would also encourage u to read my posts =).
excellent Alia.
Thank u Arjun ! =)
That is pure talent right there! Beautiful. Lovely.
Great views on that!
I like poetry that I can see in my head – you write like that 🙂